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Nice! :D I like it, no problems here. Keep it up!

Only a few non-rhyming mistakes in some of the lines. Overall, I love poems like this. Very good job. :)

Nice poem, but it could use some work. I liked it. I liked your style. :)

Little confusing, and some of the stanza's did not make sense. But overall it was enjoyable. :)

Nice poem. I really didn't think there was any problem. You did a good job. :)

Very good. It'll make a great story. Loved the wording and description. Write more! :)

Very nice! :) I really liked the theme and the style, I it a very good piece of work. I be waiting for more!

The shortness of the poem really worked for me. I really liked the theme. Very interesting. :)

Very nice. Only a few typos, and other than that, I was fine. 8)

Very good. I love Naruto/Shippuuden, and this was a really good story. Waiting to read more. :)

Very strange, but in a good way. Sounded weird, but I suck at poetry, so don't mind me! :lol:

Firestarter point exactly. It was good overall, but some of the lines didn't seem to hit. :?

Very original and creative. I was cool and interesting and I kept wanting to read more after I was finished. Nice job. :)

I don't really have anything to say. :? I was pretty good, nice and short, but something just didn't hit it off for me. Keep up the good work.

Great work. The format is cool, and it was short and to the point! :) Liked It.